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Old 06-26-2008, 08:40 PM
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Old 07-03-2008, 05:03 PM
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no inspiration its groundhog day in here and dahm I got lazy
slife is my chronic fatigue made my thought process petite
no ideas or thoughts my memory got hazy
i focus on to the left top corner of my view
and nope no point of view to spew
i just wana get boredom
to confess leisure by waterboarding it
jog my memory with car battery
to spark a idea
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Old 09-04-2008, 02:32 AM
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bismilaahi rahmani rahiiiiim

waaaa tiiiiiyni waa zaaytuuuun atuuri siyniyn wa haadhal baladil amiyn laqad khalaqnal insaana fiy ahsani taqwiym thum ma radadnaahu asfala saaaafiliyn ilaaa laadhiyna aamanuu wa camilu saaalihaati fa lahum ajrun qaayru mamnuun fa maa yukadh dhibuka ba adu bid diyn a laysal laaahu bi ahkamil Haa kaamiyn

sadaqu laahi cadiiiiim


like the opening credits
of dreamworks
as the kid sits on
the crescent of the moon
as his hook comes down
like the quran on Mohammad pbuh
it knocked on the house poems
who could this be
ramadhan
has served me
ahlan waaa sahlan ya ramadhan,
my duty as muslim by the judge of all judges
for i have the wealth of health
to let go of all my grudges
for shaytan has been shackled
in hell and his gates been guarded
and the clouds to haven have parted
for its the month to build the pillars
to hold this house and its fillers
shahdah, salaat , sawm and to
leave vanity fair to give zakaat
in the name of Allah
the most merciful
the most kind
with month supply of date
i would more then gladly
rewind to the first day
of ramdan
with hunger and obedience
exercise a no tolerance for haram
and strengthen my imaan
with trawiih prayer to
weep repent and lament
purify mind body and soul
from dusk till dawn
build apatite with salaat
let threesome of buur and sambuus
spices and sweet flavour loose
and party in your mouth heheheheh im bored i have nothing better to do

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Old 09-04-2008, 07:06 AM
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bismilaahi rahmani rahiiiiim

waaaa tiiiiiyni waa zaaytuuuun atuuri siyniyn wa haadhal baladil amiyn laqad khalaqnal insaana fiy ahsani taqwiym thum ma radadnaahu asfala saaaafiliyn ilaaa laadhiyna aamanuu wa camilu saaalihaati fa lahum ajrun qaayru mamnuun fa maa yukadh dhibuka ba adu bid diyn a laysal laaahu bi ahkamil Haa kaamiyn

sadaqu laahi cadiiiiim


like the opening credits
of dreamworks
as the kid sits on
the crescent of the moon
as his hook comes down
like the quran on Mohammad pbuh
it knocked on the house poems
who could this be
ramadhan
has served me
ahlan waaa sahlan ya ramadhan,
my duty as muslim by the judge of all judges
for i have the wealth of health
to let go of all my grudges
for shaytan has been shackled
in hell and his gates been guarded
and the clouds to haven have parted
for its the month to build the pillars
to hold this house and its fillers
shahdah, salaat , sawm and to
leave vanity fair to give zakaat
in the name of Allah
the most merciful
the most kind
with month supply of date
i would more then gladly
rewind to the first day
of ramdan
with hunger and obedience
exercise a no tolerance for haram
and strengthen my imaan
with trawiih prayer to
weep repent and lament
purify mind body and soul
from dusk till dawn
build apatite with salaat
let threesome of buur and sambuus
spices and sweet flavour loose
and party in your mouth heheheheh im bored i have nothing better to do

Nice work, you got skills man

keep writing
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Old 10-11-2008, 06:15 AM
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sonnet

oh how i held the keeeey
till the wind blew me to
world i couldn’t foreseeee
how could have i lost it aaall
i use to loooad the dice
smile as i helped atlas lift and lower the sky
innocent and true when i breathed rhythm and sighed the blues
till i fed my self sweet lies
when i fell for delilah eyes
on silver plate she took away my drum
ever since then i don’t know what i have become
now i roam the streets leaving trail of tears
nourishing the earth and dying of fear
oh who would ever want to live with out beat



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Old 10-11-2008, 07:10 AM
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My Angel


my angel is the one who looks over me
My angel is the who cares for me
My angel is the one who loves me
My angel has beautiful brown eyes
My angel has beautiful black hair
My angel will be there when I get hurt
My angel will be the one that is always on my mind
she is the angel that keeps me breathing
she is the angel of my dreams
she is the angel that keeps me alive
My angel will cheer me up when I’m sad
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Old 10-11-2008, 07:16 AM
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heheheh
heheh
heh nice one bro
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Old 10-11-2008, 09:07 AM
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Abdirazaaq, you have a rich vocabulary its quite delicious to behold. And having honestly taken the time to read all of your poems. I must confess, I enjoyed the ones that rhymed more because they gave me a chance to breath and I'm a simple creature both in heart and of mind. What I found amusing and easy to relate to however was your obesseion or shall I say constant mention of popular culture and the way your erratic thoughts often makes the reader feel as if they're spinning in a wirlpool of political struggles and otherworldy delusions of paranoia. In essence, your too bloody deep for me liking LOL and in you I can see a youngman who wishes to change the world and overwhelming politically incorrect freedom fighter. Your peoms are full of passion and have a multitude of layers and meanings that I would become lost them had I possessed the power to transcribe them.

In conclusion, I am very much impressed with them. You’re a talented wordsmith and erratically eloquente.I also loved that you have touched upon mythology-both greek, biblical, quranic and even hebrew ideas. Its facinating to watch how you feel all these bits of imformation link together.

Next time, please do write a poem about the simplicity of life (not too deep damn you!)..something subtle- easy and most of all which rhymes. LOL- I am a child, indulge me

Other poets whose work I enjoyed reading was, Ender- lord her words are delicious to behold. Such an imgination and the ease with which she manages to produce those couplets is really quite scrumtious.

Ps Jamila- I read your little poem too and I am impressed its sweet as hell and I am amazed that you europeans can write with such accuracy with more than 3 langauges to learn while I can barely manage the one.
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Old 10-11-2008, 01:19 PM
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh i could just die now thanks.......but i tried to keep it simple in my last few poems plus im lazy n out of ideas
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Old 10-11-2008, 01:46 PM
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That Is Good Wooow Manshallah U Lots R Good .....i Hope U Didnt Get It Frm Google Lool
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